"Do one thing every day that scares you." Eleanor Roosevelt

Friday, December 10, 2010

Bare Branches

The stark beauty of the oak’s bare limbs, silhouetted against the metallic blue December sky, caught Darcy’s attention. From a distance, each branch, a variant shade of gray, appeared interwoven with another, creating an intricate pattern that suggested strength.

But Darcy knew different. A single, thin branch, stripped of it leaves and laid against the bare limb of a little girl, was strong enough, on its own, to leave a painful, red welt. And a memory that scarred for a lifetime.

2 comments:

Karen said...

Very good description,then dramatic switch really gets your attention. Is this the beginning of a story you're working on? You have a misspelling- after creating, it should be "an" instead of "a." Good work!

Donna said...

I am not sure what this is .... yet.
Thanks for reading and commenting.